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I like the way you chose to animate your characters but the way that your scenes play out can become dull. Having the quick panning virtual camera was a good thing but go beyond that and use it to your advantage. Try getting a few more angles in each scene and come up with your own unique way to animate the moving mouths.

By doing so I am sure that your animation should flow so much better in the final product.

Good luck.

Rob

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for the constructive critism.

Again, I wasn't really going to flatter, it was more of a project to finish.

I might actually make something out of it, though.

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Score: 7

"Creative Style keep developing it!"

submission: I choose Indecision 1

date: June 14, 2007

I really enjoyed this piece... It reminded me of all the self made sound effects I would do on my old works. But next time try to achieve more of a clean sound in your animations.

I liked how you were able to utilize different angles and build up your entire scene.

Keep it up! Your work is really starting to look smooth.

Rob

July 21, 2007

Author's Response:

Thanks for the constructive critisism. I've made movies since then, taken more time over them and got much better reviews. Plus ive been happier about them myself which is the main thing isnt it. I searched for you on newgrounds but could only find games. How come you dont have any movies up?